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Jane Doe
555 5th Street
Any City, Any State 12345
H: 123-456-7890 C: 123-789-4561
Email: hireme@gmail.com
Objective:
To obtain a high paying position that has flezible hours so I can stay at home with my kids and offers at least 4 weeks paid vacation.
Experience:
Office Manager, January 1991 – Present.
ABC Electric, Any City, Any State
- I reported to the President and was responsible for the day-to-day operations of the company
- I helped customers and various contractors to schedule different jobs as well as to understand and resolve different problems
- I assign work to our field personnel such as electricians, installers, foremen, pipe fitters and electricians
- I track the progress and costs of all the projects, which take place in 8 different states
- I used Peachtree almost everyday for billing of jobs in our different divisions, posting payments and receipts, and for processing payroll on a monthly basis
- I write proposals for upcoming electrical projects and send them to the potemtial client
- I often compose bid-letters to create new business
- I set up company meetings to inform staff of changes to benefits or other areas
- I write memos and answer any incoming calls
Intern, September 1990 – December 1990
XXY Financial, Any City, Any State
- I answered all incoming calls and provided assistance to staff members
- I also greeted all clients upon their arrival to the office and gave them a brief tour
- I supported all large meetings and conferences by making sure all need materials and facilities were in place
Education:
Diploma in Office Administration, Best College of Administration and Technology, Any City, Any State, 1990
High School Diploma, Thomas Edison High School, Any City, Any State, 1986
Skills:
MS Excel, MS Word, Peachtree, Scanner, Fax machine, Email, photocopier, coffee maker
Memberships:
Chamber of Commerce
References:
Supplied upon request
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JANE DOE
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555 5th Street • Any City, Any State • 12345 • H: 123-456-7890 • C: 123-789-4561 • hireme@gmail.com
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PROFILE
- Excellent office administration experience.
- Exceptional communication and interpersonal skills.
- Performs well under pressure both independently and as a team player.
- Advanced computer skills including a heightened proficiency with Microsoft Office (Word, Excel, Outlook) and Peachtree Accounting Software.
EXPERIENCE
ABC ELECTRIC, Any City, Any State January 1991 – Present
Office Manager
- Coordinated day-to-day office operations while reporting directly to the President of ABC Electric.
- Managed stakeholder requests (customers as well as contractors), scheduled contractor jobs and resolved conflicts as they arose.
- Tracked the progress and cost of projects in 8 different states.
- Successfully used Peachtree Accounting Software on a daily basis for billing, posting payments and receipts in addition to processing monthly payroll.
- Coordinated and assigned work to field personnel including electricians, installers, foremen, and pipe fitters.
- Excelled in general office administration duties including reception, memo composition, the preparation of proposals for upcoming electrical projects, the composition of bid-letters to create new business and the scheduling of company meetings.
XXY FINANCIAL, Any City, Any State September– December 1990
Intern
- Provided general administrative support including reception, client greeting, client tours and overall assistance to staff members.
- Supported meeting and conference logistics by organizing facilities and ensuring that all materials were in place.
EDUCATION
- BEST COLLEGE OF ADMINISTRATION, Any City, Any State,
Diploma in Office Administration, 1990 - THOMAS EDISON HIGH SCHOOL, Any City, Any State,
High School Diploma, 1986
MEMBERSHIPS
- Any City Chamber of Commerce
REFERENCES ARE AVAILABLE UPON REQUEST