近4年高考英語(yǔ)真題分類匯編與考勢(shì)分析：書面表達(dá)

一、考綱解讀

二、備考建議

1.積累基本詞匯和句式，尤其是簡(jiǎn)單基本句式，寫好簡(jiǎn)單句。

2.背誦課文段落和范文，學(xué)會(huì)模仿一些高級(jí)句式和表達(dá)。

3.增強(qiáng)審題訓(xùn)練。

4.堅(jiān)持一周一篇或兩篇應(yīng)用文寫作。

5.練習(xí)書寫，達(dá)到整潔美觀的程度。

三、全國(guó)卷四年真題匯編

1 .假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國(guó)畫展覽。請(qǐng)寫一封信申請(qǐng)做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：1. 寫信目的；2. 個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)；3. 能做的事情。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Besides, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.

I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一封申請(qǐng)信，屬于書信應(yīng)用文。1.審題立意本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫申請(qǐng)信，人稱使用第一人稱和第二人稱，時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。2.謀篇布局書信格式，稱呼和落款文中已經(jīng)給出。首段，寫信的目的，中間段寫個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事，最后一段總結(jié)。3. 關(guān)鍵詞和句子根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)及構(gòu)思好的提綱我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和句子有：volunteer，a Chinese Painting Exhibition，advantages，I am good at…，I can help with.../I’ll devote myself to…。通過詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，并增加一些細(xì)節(jié)和過渡性的詞匯，如First of all，Besides，to begin with，moreover，as for me，Last but not least等，使全文銜接自然，語(yǔ)義流暢。

【點(diǎn)睛】

本文開門見山，表達(dá)了寫信的目的；之后詳細(xì)介紹了個(gè)人的優(yōu)勢(shì)和能做的事情，詳略得當(dāng)，內(nèi)容完整，同時(shí)使用了高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子。高級(jí)詞匯：be qualified for，be fluent in，be beneficial for等；高級(jí)句式：because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood此處使用了原因狀語(yǔ)從句。which is beneficial for introducing Chinese paintings.使用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and get them to know more about Chinese painting.使用了條件狀語(yǔ)從句。

2 .你校正在組織英語(yǔ)作文比賽。請(qǐng)以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括:1. 人物簡(jiǎn)介；2. 尊敬和愛戴的原因。注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 短文題目和首句已為你寫好。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

The person I respect

We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.

When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽。

第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文。時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。要求：1.人物簡(jiǎn)介：2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)）As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently;

第三步：連詞成句1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly.2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work.3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：介紹人物；闡述原因2.表示并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：As for; and; but; So

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改

【點(diǎn)睛】

范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫。復(fù)合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多的高端句式，如定語(yǔ)從句：My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句：When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely…等。文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然。為文章增色添彩。

3 .上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語(yǔ)角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括:1. 農(nóng)場(chǎng)情況；2. 采摘過程；3. 個(gè)人感受注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 題目已為你寫好。

題目:My Weekend

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【答案】

My Weekend

Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.

On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.

I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!

【解析】

【詳解】

第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語(yǔ)角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括： 1. 農(nóng)場(chǎng)情況；2. 采摘過程；3. 個(gè)人感受。

第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：pick peaches, is situated, beautiful scenery, fruit trees ,a variety of animals, Using baskets and ladders, take a bite, be grateful for, get close to nature, feast on the sweetness.

第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。本文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【點(diǎn)睛】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. 和Using baskets and ladders運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. 運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句；Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!運(yùn)用了連詞not only…but…和倒裝句。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。

4 .假定你是李華，你和同學(xué)根據(jù)英語(yǔ)課文改編了一個(gè)短劇。給外教Miss Evans寫封郵件，請(qǐng)她幫忙指導(dǎo)。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1. 劇情簡(jiǎn)介；2. 指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容；3. 商定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)。注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Miss Evans,

How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.

We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?

Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，請(qǐng)求外教 Miss Evans對(duì)于《the Steamboat》改編短劇的支持。

【詳解】

第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過去時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法第一段說明寫這封郵件的目的；第二段詳細(xì)說明英語(yǔ)戲劇的劇情介紹和指導(dǎo)內(nèi)容細(xì)節(jié)問題；第三段表達(dá)感謝，并期待早日得到回復(fù)。

第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）write to；according to ；combine ；adaption ；challenge；attached to ；convenient

第三步：連詞成句，根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改

【點(diǎn)睛】

范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如：If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details? 這句話運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。

5 .假定你是校排球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)李華。請(qǐng)寫封郵件告知你的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽，內(nèi)容包括:1. 比賽信息；2. 賽前準(zhǔn)備；3. 表達(dá)期待。注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Chris,

I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month. The match will take place in our school gym on the afternoon of July 4^th. We will play against the team from HongXing High School. In order to win the match, we should get fully prepared and practice hard. So from tomorrow, we need to train for two hours after school every day. Please come to the school gym at 6:30 pm from Monday to Friday.

You’re an excellent player. With you on the team, we are confident that we can win the game. Let’s try hard together!

Cheers,

Li Hua

【解析】

今年的書面表達(dá)沿襲近幾年的體裁，仍舊是應(yīng)用文。本次書面表達(dá)要求考生寫一封郵件告知隊(duì)友有關(guān)比賽的信息。本篇書面表達(dá)是一封告知信。首先要告知寫信目的；然后簡(jiǎn)明扼要地告知排球比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及賽前的準(zhǔn)備事項(xiàng)，注意事件信息的三要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物，要交代清楚；第三則要表達(dá)對(duì)隊(duì)友的期待和鼓勵(lì)。

【點(diǎn)睛】

本文內(nèi)容完整，詳略得當(dāng)，并運(yùn)用了高級(jí)句式。I’m writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball match next month.賓語(yǔ)從句；In order to win the match不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)。文章語(yǔ)言流暢，上下文轉(zhuǎn)換自然。

6 .假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請(qǐng)寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)你的英國(guó)朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 時(shí)間；

2. 活動(dòng)安排；

3. 歡迎他表演節(jié)目。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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【答案】

Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

今年的書面表達(dá)要求考生寫郵件，告知英國(guó)朋友音樂節(jié)的情況。

【詳解】首先確定提綱。先介紹寫作目的，之后介紹音樂節(jié)的時(shí)間、活動(dòng)安排等具體信息，最后歡迎他表演節(jié)目。第二，根據(jù)提綱，確定關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。第三，注意選用合適的連接詞將各要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來。

【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，詳略得當(dāng)。并使用了高級(jí)句式。如：You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.定語(yǔ)從句。提升了文章檔次。

7 .假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國(guó)朋友家做客，發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

（1）到達(dá)時(shí)間；（2）合適的禮物；（3）餐桌禮儀。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.

Hopefully, these suggestions will be helpful for you.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇書信類應(yīng)用文寫作。餐桌禮儀也是考生比較熟悉的話題。成文時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：一、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)要齊全1．到達(dá)時(shí)間；2．合適的禮物；3．餐桌禮儀。二、時(shí)態(tài)：主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來時(shí)；三、人稱：二、三人稱。四、注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)母呒?jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞和插入語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。點(diǎn)睛：本文雖然看起來比較容易，但學(xué)生真正動(dòng)起筆來，還是比較困惑的。原因?yàn)椋?/span>1.看起來中國(guó)餐桌禮儀很熟悉，但內(nèi)容很多，一時(shí)間不知道該寫什么；2.100單詞左右，寫出到達(dá)時(shí)間；合適的禮物；餐桌禮儀三個(gè)內(nèi)容，信息量大，選擇有困難；應(yīng)對(duì)方法：近年來高考寫作的命題常用的思想就是高起點(diǎn)低落點(diǎn)。高起點(diǎn)題目很高，中國(guó)文化，中國(guó)故事，中國(guó)禮儀等等，但最終都把它們落在應(yīng)用文的框架里，這就是低落點(diǎn)。寫這樣的作文，一定要注意不能寫過于具體的內(nèi)容，要找最重要的，最熟悉的寫，不要面面俱到，中國(guó)餐桌禮儀內(nèi)容太多，100單詞無(wú)法寫。找重點(diǎn)，以點(diǎn)帶面。但選擇重要內(nèi)容本身就是一種能力。

8 .假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來信詢問你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)館；2. 主要的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；3. 你喜歡的項(xiàng)目。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右：2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。____________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.

To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.

All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.

Yours,

Li Hua

【詳解】

本題作文為提綱式作文，形式依然是書信，即給英國(guó)朋友Peter介紹學(xué)校體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況，屬于學(xué)校生活話題。這一話題貼合學(xué)生生活的實(shí)際，學(xué)生并不陌生，有話可說。首先可以介紹學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)館，場(chǎng)館的位置，大小，開放時(shí)間等等。然后簡(jiǎn)要介紹學(xué)校主要開設(shè)的體育項(xiàng)目有哪些，可挑選一到兩個(gè)做詳細(xì)介紹，如學(xué)生的活動(dòng)時(shí)間，活動(dòng)形式，以及此類活動(dòng)的好處等。再次簡(jiǎn)要分析自己喜歡的體育項(xiàng)目是什么，并簡(jiǎn)單分析喜歡的原因，自己從中得到的益處等。文章可主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，第一人稱的方式來寫。

9 .你受學(xué)生會(huì)委托為校宣傳欄“英語(yǔ)天地”寫一則通知，請(qǐng)大家觀看一部英語(yǔ)短片Growing Together，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展；

(2)放映時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；

(3)歡迎對(duì)短片提出意見。

注意：

(1)詞數(shù)100左右；

(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】

One possible version:Boys and girls,

I have good news for you. The English film Growing Together made by our teachers and some senior students will be displayed this weekend. It shows us the whole history of school’s development, which is I think the attraction to us. If you are curious about the history of our school or concerned about its future, you mustn’t miss this excellent opportunity! Besides, all your suggestions and comments about this film will be welcome.

It will be displayed in the School Film Hall, from 9:00 am to 10:00 am, June 9th, Saturday.

That’s all. Thank you.

The Students Union

June 8, 2018

【解析】

【詳解】英語(yǔ)書面通知的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般將來時(shí)為主，多使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、簡(jiǎn)單句。在通知中不應(yīng)當(dāng)過度的使用較復(fù)雜的詞語(yǔ)和讀起來拗口的句子。第二個(gè)注意點(diǎn)：層次一定要清晰，一個(gè)層次要表達(dá)一件事情，使人看起來一目了然。

10 .假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)外教Henry一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.展覽內(nèi)容。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Henry，

I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．The exhibition is a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China．During the activity，I will show you around our school and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Chinese traditional culture．

Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類作文。首先審題，這篇文章要求假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)外教Henry一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2.展覽內(nèi)容。其次選用正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，用一般將來時(shí)、第一人稱來寫。然后寫出單個(gè)句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時(shí)，要注意文中給出的細(xì)節(jié)都要包括，不要遺漏。這篇文章對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【點(diǎn)睛】

本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的復(fù)合句。例如：使用了定語(yǔ)從句I'm very delighted to write a letter to tell you something about Chinese paper-cutting exhibition，which will start on June 20 in our school lecture hall and last for a week．和賓語(yǔ)從句As is well-known to us all，Chinese paper-cutting is famous all over the world and I'm sure you will be interested in it，so I plan to invite you to pay a close visit．

11 .假定你是李華。你所在的校乒乓球隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。請(qǐng)給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他加入，內(nèi)容包括：球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；報(bào)名方式及截止日期。注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】

Dear Eric，

I was informed that our school Ping-pong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping-pong.

 As you know, playing ping-pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.

Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

由要點(diǎn)可知，郵件是邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方報(bào)名參加乒乓球隊(duì)，所以主體時(shí)態(tài)為一般將來時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。人稱以第三人稱為主(介紹乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處)，一、二人稱為輔。在寫作時(shí)要注意邀請(qǐng)信的交際性，比如：開篇點(diǎn)明寫信目的，最后期待回復(fù)。同時(shí)還要注意根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。

【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多主從復(fù)合句，如： it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.這句話運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句使用了一些固定詞組，如 show great fancy in;  sign up; look forward to等。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。

12 .假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括：（1）時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；（2）內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)；（3）課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】

Dear Leslie,

I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.

Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

【詳解】

隨著時(shí)代的發(fā)展，電子郵件越來越受廣大中學(xué)生的歡迎，所以寫電子郵件是中學(xué)生經(jīng)常做的事，這種形式的寫作貼近學(xué)生生活，使他們感到熟悉。根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信件；假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。考生成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1. 要點(diǎn)要齊全：（1）時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；（2）內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)；（3）課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。2. 時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3. 人稱：第二人稱為主；4. 注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。5. 適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。

【點(diǎn)睛】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)表達(dá)方式，如賓語(yǔ)從句I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture.定語(yǔ)從句On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。

13 .假定你是李華。你校計(jì)劃舉辦介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會(huì)，并在英文網(wǎng)站展示。請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件給外國(guó)朋友Chris，向他了解哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1.闡明寫信事由；2.征求建議；3.表示感謝。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Dear Chris,

Word came that our school is going to hold a class meeting whose topic is related to Chinese traditional customs. Because this activity will be presented on the English website, I sincerely want you to offer me some advice.

As far as we know, there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. In order to get more clicks, you’d better tell me which Chinese culture you westerners prefer. What’s more, if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements, what should I do? Knowing you are interested in China, I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles.

If possible, you can reply to me as soon as possible. I will take your advice into consideration. I really appreciate your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

14 .你校將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以Be smart online learners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：1. 分析優(yōu)勢(shì)與不足；2. 提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;2. 題目和首句已為你寫好。

【答案】

one possible version:

Be smart online learners

Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems.But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages.

 First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, We can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.

 Of course, these disadvantages are as follows.Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, We can't tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.

In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生以 Be smart online learners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽。1. 詞匯積累充分利用：make full use of→ make the most of擴(kuò)寬,豐富：broaden→ enrich各種各樣： all kinds of→ varieties of不完美：imperfection→ defect2. 句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.拓展句：In conclusion , we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages ， finding a proper way to make our study more efficient.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1] Faced with all kinds of information on the internet ,We can't tell the difference between the true and  the false, which may be harmful to our study and life.（非謂語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]On the other hand ,online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）

15 .你校英文報(bào)Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷；2. 喜愛的欄目；3. 期望和祝福。注意：1. 寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2. 請(qǐng)按如下格式寫字答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Youth and Me

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】

Youth and Me

It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it isYouth that accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.

I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.

【解析】

本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，向校刊Youth表達(dá)自己的經(jīng)歷，并送上自己的祝福。1.詞匯積累建立：found→establish沮喪的：upset→depressed得到：receive→obtain賞析：enjoy→appreciate2.句式拓展同義句改寫原句：These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon.拓展句：Not only can these stories relieve my stress, but also they can broaden my horizon.

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1] When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. (運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句)

[高分句型2] Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer. (運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句還運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)