分析近幾年中考題,今年中考考提示性作文的可能性較大。什么是提示性作文?提示性作文:就是給出一個(gè)標(biāo)題或無標(biāo)題,給出具體的內(nèi)容,規(guī)定一定的字?jǐn)?shù),讓考生寫出作文。由于這類作文已經(jīng)規(guī)定了文章的中心思想和主要內(nèi)容,因此考生可以不再列出提綱,只要把注意力集中在如何正確、完整地用英文詞句表達(dá)出中心思想和內(nèi)容就可以了。寫好提示性作文應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)1、仔細(xì)審題,明確要求。對(duì)所給信息反復(fù)閱讀,弄清這個(gè)題目要表達(dá)什么,然后對(duì)所給信息進(jìn)行整理、組織,按照自己的寫作思路使之條理化。2、確保語言精煉。在寫作過程中,考生應(yīng)時(shí)刻提醒自己按照已給出的信息點(diǎn)去寫,不必有太多的發(fā)揮。但也不必按照信息點(diǎn)去逐句翻譯。用自己熟悉的短語、句型去體現(xiàn)要點(diǎn)。掌握好文章的長(zhǎng)度,不要字?jǐn)?shù)過多或過少。
[例題分析]
根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語,寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞語必須用上。字?jǐn)?shù)60~70左右。
1、昨天晚上我和媽媽出去散步。2、在路上我遇到了一個(gè)外國(guó)人。3、他向我詢問去溫泉飯店(the Hot Spring Hotel)的路?! ?、我告訴他沿著路往前走,在第三個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)彎處向左拐就能看見飯店。 5、他非常感謝我,我也為能幫他而感到高興。提示詞語:go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that
寫作指導(dǎo):根據(jù)提示我們了解到這是一篇記敘文,所以考生應(yīng)馬上想到時(shí)間(yesterday evening),地點(diǎn)(on the road),人物(I, my mother and a foreigner),事件(how to show the way)。其次觀察信息點(diǎn),我們確定這篇文章應(yīng)用過去式來表達(dá)。然后,確定這個(gè)事件應(yīng)用第一人稱來敘述。最后,按照信息點(diǎn)合理組織文章,別忘用上提示詞語。(例文)
Yesterday evening, I went out for a walk with my mother. On the road, we met a foreigner. He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel. I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel. He thanked me very much for my help. I was very happy that I could help him.
一、關(guān)于介紹家庭成員及人物描寫的話題
A
There are four people in my family, my parents, my bother and I. My family is pretty good. I’m really happy.
My brother is shy and funny. He is good at sports and does well in volleyball. But he hates studying and his grades are bad. He like telling jokes. He always plays jokes on his friends and my family, and always makes us laugh.
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital of Sanya. He doesn’t like watching TV, but he likes reading newspaper and read it every night.
My mother is a waitress. She works in a restaurant. She has good habits. She likes eating vegetables and drinking milk every day. But I don’t like milk. It is awful. She likes watching Beijing Opera at free time. She says it’s good for her to keep young and it can make her relaxed.
My families are always doing what is best for me. They are always on my side.
I love each person in my family. I love my sweet warm home.
(我的家有4個(gè)人:我的父母,我的哥哥,和我.我的家庭很棒,我很快樂.
我的哥哥害羞而有趣.他很擅長(zhǎng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并且在排球運(yùn)動(dòng)上猶為突出.但他不喜歡學(xué)習(xí)并且成績(jī)不好.他喜歡講笑話,經(jīng)常和朋友和家人開玩笑并且總能使我們發(fā)笑.
我的父親是一位醫(yī)生.他在三亞的一家醫(yī)院工作.他不喜歡看電視,但他很喜歡看報(bào)紙并且總是看到很晚.
我的母親是一位侍者.她在一家餐廳工作.她有良好的習(xí)慣.她喜歡每天吃蔬菜和喝牛奶,但我不喜歡牛奶,它遭透了.空閑時(shí)間她喜歡看京劇,她說那有利于她保持年輕并且可以使她放松.
我的家人總是做一切對(duì)我有利的事.他們總是站在我這邊.
我喜歡我的每一個(gè)家庭成員,我喜歡這個(gè)溫暖的家.)
B
根據(jù)提示寫一篇“My English Teacher”
Name: Mr. King Age: 31 Years of teaching: 10
Hobby: playing sports, watching TV, reading .
Relation with his students: strict, kind, patient.
評(píng)論:teacher, friend
My English Teacher
Mr. King is our English teacher. He is 31 years old. He became a teacher 10 years ago.
He likes playing sports, so he is very strong. He likes reading and watching TV and he has good knowledge. All of us love to listen to his class because he has a good way to make his lessons interesting. Mr King is kind to us, but very strict with us in our studies. He is patient, too. He is a good teacher and also a good friend. We all love him very much .
C
寫一篇題為“我們的班長(zhǎng)”的短文,詞數(shù)100—120。簡(jiǎn)況如下。
1.她叫李敏,個(gè)子高,身體好,很活潑。她各科成績(jī)都好,喜歡體育活動(dòng),又能歌善舞。2.她剛進(jìn)校時(shí),在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到不少困難。但她不怕苦,不怕難,努力把英語學(xué)好。3.她嚴(yán)于律己,樂于助人,是大家學(xué)習(xí)的好榜樣。
Our Monitor
Li Min is our monitor. She is tall, healthy and lively. She does well in all subjects. She is fond of sports and is good at singing and dancing.
Li Min works hard at English. When she came to the school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language. But she was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them. She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class. No pains, no gains.With great efforts she made much progress in English study.
Li Min is modest and always ready to help others. She is very strict with herself in her work and daily life. She sets us all a fine example.
D
假如你叫吳聞,想應(yīng)聘學(xué)校的學(xué)生導(dǎo)游,今年署假陪同即將來校訪問的美國(guó)朋友參觀襄樊。要求你用英語寫一篇短文向?qū)W校推薦自己。
姓名
吳聞
班級(jí)
九(4)班
性格特征
大膽、開朗、隨和
愛好特長(zhǎng)
看英語小說、打籃球、旅游、交友
相關(guān)經(jīng)歷
2007年在全校英語競(jìng)賽中獲第一名
聯(lián)系方式
mmwuwen@163.com
要求:1、短文內(nèi)容必須包括以上要點(diǎn),語意連貫、句式規(guī)范、字跡工整,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2、詞數(shù):90詞左右;3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名和人名。
My name is Wu Wen. I’m in Class 4, Grade 9. I’m very brave, outgoing and easygoing. I like traveling and making friends a lot. My favorite sport is basketball and I am very good at it. I enjoy reading English novels well. In 2007 I won the fist price in the school English competition.
I really want to be a student guide for the American friends. I’d like to show them around our school and visit Xiangfan.
My e-mail address is mmwuwen@163.com.
二、關(guān)于英語學(xué)習(xí)的話題
A
How to learn English well?
English is one of the most important languages in the world. It’s necessary to learn it well .How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways. The best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills. They are listening , speaking , reading and writing. We should practice them every day. It’s very good for you if you are interested in English . You will find studying English is interesting and helpful. One more thing, remember “Practice makes perfect”!
B
根據(jù)提示,寫一篇短文(100個(gè)詞左右)。
假如你英語學(xué)得很好,請(qǐng)你在英語班會(huì)上介紹一下學(xué)習(xí)英語的體會(huì)。 1. 簡(jiǎn)況:學(xué)習(xí)英語已有3年多。起初覺得英語難學(xué),發(fā)音不好,單詞拼不準(zhǔn)確,不會(huì)語法規(guī)則,后來,在老師和同學(xué)們的幫助下取得了很大進(jìn)步。 2. 體會(huì):要在短時(shí)間內(nèi)獲得最佳的學(xué)習(xí)效果,非下苦功夫不可。課內(nèi)外要多聽、多說、多讀和多寫。3. 建議:對(duì)同學(xué)提出適當(dāng)建議,以供他們學(xué)習(xí)參考。
How to learn English well
It is more than three years since I began to study English.At first I found it quite difficult.I couldn’t pronounce well,spell the words correctly or remember the rules of grammar. With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have made much progress.Now I am getting on well with my English.
Three years’ study has taught me that one cannot learn English well without hard work.We must do m ore listening and speaking both in and out of class.And do more reading and writing as well. That is “Practice makes perfect”.
So,in my opinion,we should work hard at English.That’s the most important thing. And we should also practise using it as much as possible.
C
How to learn Chinese?
Let me tell you how to learn Chinese. I think you may go to Chinese classes. Make Chinese friends and talk with them. You can listen to the radio or watch TV. You’d better read more Chinese stories. You should have a dictionary. It’s very useful. When you have difficulties in learning, you can ask Chinese teachers or friends for help. Chinese is not very difficult. I think you can learn it well.
三、校園及家庭生活
A
My School Life
My school life is very interesting. I usually get up at a quarter past six. After washing face, I read English about half an hour. I think it’s a good habit. I always go to school by bike, eat lunch at school and have a short sleep in the classroom. The classes always end at about 5 o’clock. After school, we often play basketball or do some sports on the playground happily. I go home at about five forty. After supper, I watch TV for a while, Then I finish my homework. I go to bed at about 9: 30.
B、回顧初中三年成長(zhǎng)過程,你一定有很多感受,從學(xué)習(xí), 生活,愛好等方面作出自我評(píng)價(jià) (畢業(yè)回顧評(píng)價(jià))
I have studied in my middle school for three years. I have learned a lot. I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends. Football is my favorite. Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese. But my math and physics are a little weak. I think I will try my best to learn them well. I hope I can study in No.1 High School.
C
中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)、壓力大,專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约?。某英文?bào)“學(xué)生習(xí)作”專欄正在就“學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞健边@一話題進(jìn)行征文。假設(shè)你是二十二中九(3)班的班長(zhǎng),最近你對(duì)班上同學(xué)課后放松方式進(jìn)行了調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格提供的調(diào)查信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報(bào)投稿。
對(duì) 象
二十二中九(3)班
人 數(shù)
60人(男:31人;女:29人)
常用放松方式
1.看電視(30人) 2.玩電腦游戲(12人) 3.聽音樂(8人) 4.進(jìn)行體育鍛煉(5人) 5.沒有時(shí)間放松(5人)
你的觀點(diǎn)
哪一種(些)放松方式是適當(dāng)?shù)模?為什么?
注意:1.短文包括對(duì)調(diào)查相關(guān)信息的介紹和你自己的觀點(diǎn); 2.詞數(shù):80-100。題目和開頭已為你寫好,不記入總詞數(shù)。
The right way(s) for students to relax
I am the monitor of Class3, Grade9, No.22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.
There are 60 students in my class(31 boys and 29 girls ).Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are busy to relax.
(As we study too long every day, every student should choose right ways to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a right way to help us relax.)I think taking exercise is a good way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, It can help improve our health.(Therefore, I often Play ping pong after class. It’s really helpful to both my health and my study.)
D
俗話說“國(guó)有國(guó)法,家有家規(guī)?!睘榱耸棺优硇慕】?、順利成長(zhǎng),使家庭成員之間的關(guān)系更融洽、更和詣,每個(gè)家庭都會(huì)有這樣或那樣的家庭規(guī)矩。比如:必須按時(shí)回家,不準(zhǔn)打電子游戲等。請(qǐng)結(jié)合家庭的實(shí)際情況,根據(jù)下面的提示和要求,以“My Family Rules”為題,寫一篇短文。
提示:1、家里有哪些家規(guī);2、對(duì)家規(guī)的感受;3、對(duì)父母的建議。
要求:必須包括提示內(nèi)容,可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2、詞數(shù):90詞左右;3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名和人名。
My Family Rules
My parents are very strict with me, and they have made come basic rules which I must obey. Firstly, I must finish my homework in time. Secondly, I cannot play computer games, even in my free time or on weekends. Thirdly, I have to do some chores, such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom and so on. If I break one of them, I will be punished (處罰).But thanks to these rules. I can live a healthy and regular(規(guī)律的)life.
I think the second rule is unfair to me. I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while, it will make me relaxed.
D
假如你是一名九(3)班的的學(xué)生,經(jīng)常為看電視的事跟媽媽鬧意見,今天你和媽媽達(dá)成了一致。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表格的內(nèi)容,以“An Agreement”為題寫一篇100字左右的英語短文。
母親
兒子
九年級(jí)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)重,看電視浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。
學(xué)習(xí)一天很疲勞,看電視可以放松一下。
兒子自制力差,看電視會(huì)影響學(xué)習(xí),長(zhǎng)期看電視會(huì)影響視力。
看電視也可以增長(zhǎng)知識(shí),開闊眼界,緊跟時(shí)代。
上學(xué)期間不看電視,但在周末可以看新聞、體育或科普類節(jié)目。
注意:1、短文的開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總數(shù);2、不要漏掉表格中的內(nèi)容,可充分發(fā)揮合理的想象,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使短文意思通暢;3、可適當(dāng)增添合乎情理的過渡性語言。
I am a student of Class Three, Grade Nine. I often quarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in Grade Nine are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems to her that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can’t accept her ideas. I think it is a relaxation to watch TV after a day’s hard work.. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but watching TV can open my eyes. Now we’ve at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV on weekends, and the programs should be limited to news, program on sports or science.
四、我與奧運(yùn)
A、北京將舉辦2008年奧運(yùn)會(huì),做為一個(gè)初中生你將為奧運(yùn)做些什么作為一個(gè)學(xué)生或中國(guó)人,你能為2008 奧運(yùn)會(huì)做些什么?
Everyone knows that there is a very important sports meeting in the world called the Olympic Games. It’s held once every four years.
The twenty-ninth Olympic Games will be held in Beijing . 2008 is coming. Beijing will host the 2008 Olympics. More and more foreign friends will come to China. As a Chinese student, I should be friendly to them. At first, English is very important for me. I should learn English well so that I can help foreign visitors. Improving our environment is also important. I should behave well. We can plant more trees and flowers. The more , the better. I am sure Beijing will be much nicer in 2008. Welcome to Beijing , welcome to China.
I hope I can go to Beijing to watch the 2008 Olympics. I wish the 29th Olympic Games will be held successfully!
B、2008年奧運(yùn)會(huì)我要做一名志愿者
I want to be a volunteer of Beijing Olympic Games. I realized the time flies. I must study English very hard. Because English is very useful and it is very important. And to be a volunteer of the Olympic Games is good for myself too. I can make some friends from different countries and learn more about sport, about Olympic. But the first thing to prepare this is study hard, I am confident I will to be a good volunteer and I will show the world: Our country and our cities are so perfect in the world.
C、北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)期間,有一大批外國(guó)人來北京參觀。假設(shè)你是導(dǎo)游,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容,向外賓簡(jiǎn)單介紹北京的情況。 要求: 1. 100 詞左右; 2. 要點(diǎn)包括: a. 有悠久的歷史b. 有許多名勝古跡
Ladies and gentlemen,(女士們、先生們)
Welcome to Beijing, now let me introduce Beijing to you.(歡迎到北京,我來介紹北京給大家。)
Beijing is a city with a long history. It is in the north of China. It has a population of 13,240,000.(北京是一個(gè)歷史悠久的城市,它位于中國(guó)的北部,人口13.240.000)
There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Summer Palace and so on.(北京有很多名勝古跡,象頤和園等等。) The Great Wall is a beautiful place.(長(zhǎng)城是個(gè)漂亮的地方)There is a saying that he who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man. (有句諺語說:不到長(zhǎng)城非好漢)The water in Miyun is clean and not polluted. (密云水庫的水很干凈沒有受污染。)There are all kinds of fish in it. (里邊有各種各樣的魚。)You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there.(那里你可以劃船、釣魚或者野炊) It is really a good place to spend your holiday.(那里真是個(gè)度假的好地方。)Besides, you can go and visit Beijing Museum. (此外,你還可以去游覽北京博物館。)There you can see a lot of dinosaur eggs.(那里你可以看到很多恐龍蛋和化石。)I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Beijing.(我希望大家在北京玩得開心快樂。)
Thank you.(謝謝)
五、關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)的話題
A、
Our environment is very important for our lives. We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on . In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean. But now, people cut down many trees. Air pollution and water pollution are very serious . The environment around us becomes very terrible. We should protect our environment. Firstly, we should plant many trees to keep water. Secondly , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.. Thirdly , we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river . Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags. Finally, we can ask more people to join us.
B、節(jié)約用水、保護(hù)水的作文:
The most important problem in the world today is pollution .(當(dāng)今世界最重要的話題就是污染問題。)It’s our duty to save water(節(jié)約水是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任。)As we know , water is very important to man, (我們知道,水對(duì)人類來說是非常的重要。)we can’t live without water. (沒有水我們就不能生存。)The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. (適合人類喝的水是越來越少了。)But some people don’t care about it .(但是有些人卻不關(guān)心或不在意。)They waste a lot of water in their daily life. (日常生活中他們浪費(fèi)很多水。)Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.(更糟糕的是他們排放污水到河流里。) They throw rubbish into rivers , too. (他們還亂扔垃圾到河流理去。)Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.(很多河流湖泊已經(jīng)受到嚴(yán)重污染。) Something must be done to stop the pollution. (人類必須采取一些措施來制止污染。)Only in this way can we live happily.(只有這樣我們才生活的幸福)If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.( 如果我們不節(jié)約水,那么最后一滴水也許會(huì)是我們?nèi)祟惖难蹨I)
C、如何保護(hù)環(huán)境(How to Protect the Environment)
Good environment can make people feel happy and fit . To improve the environment means to improve our life. We should plant more trees and flowers around us . We shouldn’t cut them down . We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air. Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins. Never spit in public. Don’t draw on public walls. It’s our duty to protect the environment.
六、健康生活
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Health is far more important than wealth. Good health let us enjoy our life. ,But poor health leads to nothing.
How can we keep healthy Here is some advice. First, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they provide vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet. Second, we'd better exercise every day to make our bodies strong. Finally, we have to give up bad habits, such as drinking and smoking.
If we stick to the advice given above, we will ha e a healthy life.
As we know, keeping healthy is important to us. But what should we do to keep healthy?
First, we should get up early. we should eat healthy food, drink a lot of water and do more exercise. Food can give us energy. Doing exercise can make us strong. Second, we should change clothes often, wash hands often, keep the air fresh and clean and do house cleaning often to stop germs (細(xì)菌)from getting into our bodies. You shouldn’t keep long fingernails (指甲). At last, we should go to see a doctor at once if we don’t feel well.
C、2007年4月29日,全國(guó)億萬學(xué)生陽光體育運(yùn)動(dòng)正式啟動(dòng)。為此,襄樊市教育局專門下文件,規(guī)定在校學(xué)生每天體育活動(dòng)時(shí)間不得低于一小時(shí)。你校為使活動(dòng)安排更科學(xué)、合理,更具針對(duì)性,向全體學(xué)生征求意見。假如你叫王寧,請(qǐng)你就活動(dòng)安排時(shí)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、形式等用英語向?qū)W校提一些合理化的建議。
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I’m glad to hear that we will have sports for an hour every day. Learning is very important but health is also important. Without good health, we can’t study well. So I think we can go to the playground after two classes every afternoon. We can play basketball, football, table tennis, and we can also go running, jumping and so on. Boys and girls can choose their favourite sports, and join different sports clubs. If possible, we can hold all kinds matches between classes.
If we keep doing like these, we’ll become stronger and study better.